2011年考研英语二大作文是启航考研英语备考清单中的必练题型。本文带来的高分批改范例，配套启航教育老师的逐句批注与预测话题标签，适合考研英语考生在冲刺阶段精读精练，是一套完整的写作提升资料。

一、考研英语二2011年大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、考研英语二2011年大作文批改例文

The bar chart shows the market shares of three car brands in China’s sedan market in 2008 and 2009.

In 2008, Japanese brands had the biggest share (35%), then domestic brands (25%) and American brands (about 12%). But in 2009, things changed: domestic brands rose to 32%, Japanese brands fell to 25%, and American brands went up a little to 13%.

Why did this happen? First, domestic cars became cheaper and better, so more people bought them. Second, Japanese cars may have become less popular.

I think domestic brands will do better later. They can keep improving, and more Chinese people will choose them. International brands need to work harder to stay in the market.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：market shares of three car brands in China’s sedan market in 2008 and 2009. In 2008, Japanese brands had the biggest share (35%), then domestic brands (25%) and American brands (about 12%). But in 2009, things changed: domestic brands rose to 32%, Japanese brands fell to 25%, and American brands went up a little to 13%. Why did this happen? First, domestic cars became cheaper and better, so more people bought them. Second, Japanese cars may have become less popular. I think domestic brands will do better later. They can keep improving, and more Chinese people will choose them. International brands need to work harder to stay in the market.

批改：内容读起来挺顺，也没什么大错误，就是字有点少啊

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：7/15分。

1. 题目要求：作文主体明确，字数110左右，偏少。建议分三段，开头两端合并，中间详细分析，最后预测趋势；

2. 语言表达：运用的词汇和句型偏简单，建议加入各类从句，长短语，非谓语结构，介宾结构等丰富内容；

3. 行文逻辑：建议采用恰当的衔接手法，使内容较为连贯；

4. 建议：文章原创度很高，内容读起来挺顺，可见功底还是很不错的，同学可以花点时间再构思重写一下，你的实力肯定是10分往上的，加油！

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