对于考研英语一而言，2011年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、考研英语一2011年大作文题目

考研英语一2011年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and3) give your comments.You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2011年大作文批改例文

As shown in the cartoon, there are two tourists, eating food and throwing rubbish into the river, which makes the fish to die. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that environmental protection is an issue that required great attention both in our personal lives and in society.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, tragically, although the lack of clear rules and regulations might contribute to this phenomenon, its root cause lies in the fact that some individuals, in their pursuit of economic interests, have their disregarded the virtue of environmental protection. What is more, environmental protection holds exceptional significance for our nation, as it serves as a crucial coronerstone for boosting overall national strength and safeguarding public health, further propelling social stability and sustainable development.

How can we put an end to the problem of environmental pollution? It is suggest d by many that we need a package deal including issuing related laws and enhancing supervision. But would these measures be comprehensive enough? In reality, we also need to strengthen the guiding role of the media in public option. With the support of these measures, we can effectively tackle the issue at its core.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：makes the fish to die

批改：“make sb./sth. do” 为固定结构，需去掉 “to”

原文：required

批改：时态错误（此处为客观事实，需用一般现在时 “requires”）

原文：their

批改：删去

原文：coronerstone

批改： 拼写错误（应为 “cornerstone”）

原文：As shown in the cartoon, there are two tourists, eating food and throwing rubbish into the river, which makes the fish to die. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that environmental protection is an issue that required great attention both in our personal lives and in society.

批改：描述了图片内容，符合题目要求

原文：This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, tragically, although the lack of clear rules and regulations might contribute to this phenomenon, its root cause lies in the fact that some individuals, in their pursuit of economic interests, have their disregarded the virtue of environmental protection. What is more, environmental protection holds exceptional significance for our nation, as it serves as a crucial coronerstone for boosting overall national strength and safeguarding public health, further propelling social stability and sustainable development.

批改：提出了相应的观点，使用了表示逻辑关系的连接词，条理较为清晰

原文：How can we put an end to the problem of environmental pollution? It is suggest d by many that we need a package deal including issuing related laws and enhancing supervision. But would these measures be comprehensive enough? In reality, we also need to strengthen the guiding role of the media in public option. With the support of these measures, we can effectively tackle the issue at its core.

批改：提出了一些解决方法，升华主题

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：16

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