历年考研英语大作文命题往往聚焦社会、经济、文化与教育等核心话题。本文精解的2010年考研英语一真题，正是考研英语作文真题范文常考方向中的代表题。透过启航老师逐段批注，可帮助考生建立稳定的写作思路。

一、考研英语一2010年大作文题目

考研英语一2010年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2010年大作文批改例文

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This is a simple but enlightening cartoon. There is a hot pot, but not foods in it. There are so many elements of Chinese and Western cultures, such as kong Fu, Peking Opera, Shakespare and so on. Finally, some Chinese characters. below the picture, say "The cultural not pot" is both of delicious and nuritous." such a scenario, apparently, can be associated with. currency pehonmeon that cultural intergration. It can be likened to a double-edged sword. On the one hand, cultural intergration bring young people learns more various cultures, and experiences the time-honored history of Chinese cultural. In order to improve proundful of cultural confidence. On the other hands, It will lead to Chinese cultural loss it cultural subjectivity. Thus it is adviseble to us under the greater emphasis on traditional Chinese culture. Only in this way, the cultural inte--gration can develop.

As a college student, I attach great importance to spreading traditional Chinese culture and be fond of cultural intergration friutfuls. It is ness--ssery for the progress that world civilization. diversity.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：but not foods in it

批改：but there is no food in it.

原文：kong Fu

批改：kung fu

批改：逗号

原文：not

批改：hot

原文：of

批改：不需要加介词，去掉of

原文：nuritous

批改：nutritional

原文：such

批改：such首字母大写

原文：. currency

批改：current形容词

原文：pehonmeon

批改：phenomenon

原文：that

批改：不需要使用从句，后面是名词短语，改成of

原文：intergration

批改：integration

原文：intergration

批改：

原文：bring

批改：makes使得

原文：learns

批改：原形learn

原文：cultural

批改：名词culture

原文：proundful of

批改：去掉

原文：In order to improve proundful of cultural confidence.

批改：为了提升文化自信该怎么做呀？后面没有内容了

原文：hands

批改：hand

原文：Chinese cultural loss it cultural subjectivity.

批改：the loss of Chinese culture是正确的表达

原文：adviseble

批改：advisable

原文：under

批改：to put

原文：the cultural inte--gration can develop.

批改：can the cultural integration develop，注意到装

原文：This is a simple but enlightening cartoon. There is a hot pot, but not foods in it. There are so many elements of Chinese and Western cultures, such as kong Fu, Peking Opera, Shakespare and so on. Finally, some Chinese characters. below the picture, say "The cultural not pot" is both of delicious and nuritous." such a scenario, apparently, can be associated with. currency pehonmeon that cultural intergration. It can be likened to a double-edged sword. On the one hand, cultural intergration bring young people learns more various cultures, and experiences the time-honored history of Chinese cultural. In order to improve proundful of cultural confidence. On the other hands, It will lead to Chinese cultural loss it cultural subjectivity. Thus it is adviseble to us under the greater emphasis on traditional Chinese culture. Only in this way, the cultural inte--gration can develop

批改：论述的内容较为全面，运用逻辑关系词使得句与句之间衔接较为紧密。注意避免小的语言错误。

原文：be

批改：am

原文：intergration

批改：

原文：friutfuls

批改：去掉

原文：ness--ssery

批改：necessary

原文：the progress that world civilization. diversity.

批改：the progress and diversity of world civilization

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/20

内容切题，全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，注意避免拼写错误；句式方面和语法方面，注意句子结构的完整连贯，注意从句的正确使用。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

修改建议：需注意避免以上的一些小的细节性错误，注意句子结构的正确表述。加油。

很多考研英语考生都遇到过写作时思路枯竭、句式单一的问题，本文精解的2010年考研英语一范文正是突破这一瓶颈的优质范本。启航教育写作主讲会针对考研英语一常考话题逐一拆解，让考研英语作文真题范文写作变得有迹可循。