一篇高分的考研英语大作文，常常具备结构清晰、句式多变、词汇地道三大特点。本文精解的2025年考研英语二批改范例，每一段都体现了这三大要素，启航教育考研英语二大作文教研组对该范文进行了详细的亮点标注。

一、2025年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2025年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should 1)describe and interpret the chart, and 2)give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2025年考研英语二大作文批改例文

Dear John，

I hope this email finds you well. I"m planning a short play based on a classic Chinese novel. My propose of this email is to invite you to take part in it.

"Dearm of the Red Chamber"is extremely inspiring，and each reading this book brings different insign.Accordingly，I"m going to adapt this novel into the short play.Additionally，This short play embodies China"s profound and diverse ancient culture and provides a fascinating glimpse into the country"s rich history.Last but not least，with your exceptional expertise，I hope you can participate in the short play.I believe it will definitely bring you brand-new experience.The details forthe short play are attached for your reference.

Looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest convenience.

Your sincerely，

Li Ming

(老师，之前我的考研英语二大作文不小心提交到小作文处了，那边老师已经帮我批改了大作文了，可以帮我最后看看这篇小作文吗，辛苦老师了)

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：propose

批改：改为 “purpose”（名词，目的）

原文：Dearm

批改：“Dream”

原文：insign

批改：“insights”

原文：T

批改：首字母小写

原文：forthe

批改：分开

原文：Your sincerely

批改：Yours sincerely,

原文：I hope this email finds you well. I"m planning a short play based on a classic Chinese novel. My propose of this email is to invite you to take part in it.

批改：表明写信意图，符合题目要求

原文："Dearm of the Red Chamber"is extremely inspiring，and each reading this book brings different insign.Accordingly，I"m going to adapt this novel into the short play.Additionally，This short play embodies China"s profound and diverse ancient culture and provides a fascinating glimpse into the country"s rich history.Last but not least，with your exceptional expertise，I hope you can participate in the short play.I believe it will definitely bring you brand-new experience.The details forthe short play are attached for your reference.

批改：提出自己的建议，条理较为清晰

原文：Looking forward to hearing from you at the earliest convenience.

批改：书信内容结构完整

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：7

核心意图明确：全文紧扣 “邀请 John 参与《红楼梦》改编短剧” 的核心，开篇点明目的，中间说明小说价值、短剧意义，结尾期待回复，符合邀请类书信的要求。主要问题在于单词的拼写错误（Dearm/insign），写完再整体检查一下，希望继续努力，加油！

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