据启航教育英语教研组统计，考研英语写作模板话题连续多年成为考研英语二大作文的高频考点。本文带来的2011年考研英语二批改例文中，考生通过对社会热点的精准分析与地道表达，获得高分，其写作思路可供2027考研英语二考生直接借鉴。

一、2011年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The chart clearly display"s the percentage breakdown of the cars of different countries in 2008 and 2009. The brands of Japanese cars takes the lead at about 35% in 2008. The brand of Chinese cars takes the lead at about 30% in 2009. Additionally, factors such as the brand of American is also considered, accounting for 10% in 2008 and 2009.

The reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, I think domestic cars don"t perform well because the technology is not matured. In addition, my opinion is that the Japanese car is more appropriate to Chinese people than American cars. The cars of international brand is also more popular in 2008 and 2009. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

In the end, I"m confident that Chinese car will be more and more popular in the future.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：display"s

批改：谓语动词变单三应为 displays

原文：takes

批改：谓语动词应为 took

原文： brand

批改：用复数 “brands” 更合理

原文： takes

批改：同上，改为 took

原文：the brand of American

批改：同上，改为 the brands of American cars

原文：is

批改：主语是factors ,改为 were

原文：is

批改： 谓语动词 is应为were

原文： brand

批改：变复数，改为 brands

原文：matured

批改：matured通常指生物体的“成熟”，形容技术应用 mature ,改为 mature

原文：the Japanese car is

批改：同上， 改为 the Japanese cars are ....

原文： car

批改：变复数，改为 cars

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10 /15

从结构层面看，本文脉络清晰，采用三段式写作，开头清楚表明图片，中间进行了分析，最后做出了总结；

从内容层面看，第二段的没有解释为什么现如今更倾向于购买国产车，第三段凭空预测国产车会受欢迎；

从语言层面看，可数名词根据语境判断，前面要有冠词或者变复数，主谓一致、同义词修饰对象的区分。

建议：检查单词拼写，语法细节。自己多积累范文，进一步提高自己的表达，加油！

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