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一、考研英语二2011年大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、考研英语二2011年大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the situation of car-selling in our country. In 2008, the percentage of Chinese brand was approximately 25%, but by 2009, this rate had substantially risen to 30%. Meanwhile, the proportion of Japanese brand experienced a signiticant dacine of about 7% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of US brand remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to driving domestic car and have become the primary consumer group. In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by china"s manufacturing industry in responding to these changes.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic brand will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of other countries" brand will likely continue to decrease relatively stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：signiticant

批改：significant

原文：dacine

批改：decline

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the situation of car-selling in our country. In 2008, the percentage of Chinese brand was approximately 25%, but by 2009, this rate had substantially risen to 30%. Meanwhile, the proportion of Japanese brand experienced a signiticant dacine of about 7% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of US brand remained stable and steady.

批改：清晰简要地描述了图表信息，言简意赅。

原文：china"s

批改：China"s首字母大写

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to driving domestic car and have become the primary consumer group. In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by china"s manufacturing industry in responding to these changes.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词分析图表中现象的背后原因，全面细致。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic brand will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of other countries" brand will likely continue to decrease relatively stable

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误，国家名作为专有名词首字母要大写；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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