思想品质、教育文化是考研英语大作文的高频命题方向，本文呈现的2015年考研英语二批改范例正是聚焦这一主旨。启航教育老师透过文章结构、衔接表达和结尾升华三方面，逐段展示了一篇考研英语写作冲刺高分范文的诞生过程。

一、2015年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2015年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2015年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The pie chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of spendings during the Spring Festival among residents in the city in China. New Year gifts takes the lead at 40%, followed by transportation, gathering and dinning, and others at 20% respectively.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To strat with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforsts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford presents that were previously deemed luxury items. In addition, as the saying goes,"On life"s stage pressure is always present."Nowadays, residents are compelled to confront immense life pressure, and as a result, gathering and traveling has emerged as their significant choice during the Spring Festival. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of residents, serving us a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：in

批改：改为of比较好，因为后面用了in China

原文：ew Ye

批改：前面可以加The percentage of

原文：breakdown of spendings during the Spring Festival among residents in the city in China. New Year gifts takes the lead at 40%, followed by transportation, gathering and dinning, and others at 20% respective

批改：第一段还是比较简单明了的，数据清晰，句子结构完整

原文：fforsts

批改：efforts

原文：ed

批改：后面可以加个as

原文：age

批改：后加逗号

原文：veli

批改：travelling

原文：ctor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforsts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford presents that were previously deemed luxury items. In addition, as the saying goes,"On life"s stage pressure is always present."Nowadays, residents are compelled to confront immense life pressure, and as a result, gathering and traveling has emerged as their significant choice during the Spring Festival. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurpris

批改：写的还是可以的，句子结构完整，内容符合题目要求，能够反映现象和本质之间的关系，注意一些小错误哦

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：9/15

语法：语法上注意标点，固定搭配，句子表述要完整哦。

逻辑：整体逻辑可以的，第二段很通顺。

词汇：单词整体还行，但是写错了单词哦，注意一些词汇使用的适当性哦。

内容：内容比较符合英文作文写作要求，结构合理。

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