对于考研英语一而言，2013年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2013年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2013年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2013年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes in part-time job situations among college students at a certain university. In the freshman year,the percentage of students taking part-time jobs was approximately 67.77%,but by the junior year,this rate had substantially risen to 71.93%. In contrast,the proportion of students taking part-time jobs experienced a significant increase of 16.31% from the junior year to the senior year.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.To start with,as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes,our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound employment system,enabling university students to have ample opportunities for further work. In addition,as the saying goes,“On life’s stage,pressure is always present.”Nowadays,university students are compelled to confront immense financial pressure,and as a result,taking part-time jobs has emerged as their significant choice for utilizing leisure time. Considering these factors,the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of students taking part-time jobs will steadily increase in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

批改：语法正确

批改：语法正确

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图表内容

批改：语法正确

批改：语法正确

批改：内容表达很好，也很具体

批改：语法正确，结尾段表达也很好

原文：for further work

批改：改为 find suitable part-time jobs 与图表内容更贴切

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：14分/ 15分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明的个人观点与图表的内容是贴合的

语言表达：不存在语法和拼写问题，词汇表达不错，句式表达也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

建议：内容写得很好，之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，提高自己的表达，试着多用自己的话来写，加油！

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