思想品质、教育文化是考研英语大作文的高频命题方向，本文呈现的2010年考研英语一批改范例正是聚焦这一主旨。启航教育老师透过文章结构、衔接表达和结尾升华三方面，逐段展示了一篇考研英语作文真题范文高分范文的诞生过程。

一、考研英语一2010年大作文题目

考研英语一2010年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2010年大作文批改例文

As shown in the cartoon, there is a boiling hot pot. filled with many culture element, including lao she, Kung fu, Shakespeare, Suan lake and so on. Evently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that it is diversity culture that plays an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society

This phenomeron is thought-provoking in several ways. but two of them are particularly srgnificant. First and foremost,learn about diverse cultures holds exceptional signor

ificance for a nation, as it serves as a crucial cornerstone for boosting overall nationd

al strength, further propelling social stability and sustainable development. What is more, neglecting diversrty culture is like a heavy chain that hirders our nation"s prgress,not only hindering its ability to maintain healthy and rapid growth, but also significantly affecting its internation development.

In brief, learing duerbly clulture is the catalyst for societal and personal development, from witch we all stand to benefit Therefore, we shoult actively support and advocate this practice we should actiely promote and carry forward traditronal culture Only lay. doing so can we make our world shine with renewed brillrance.

三、考研英语作文批改

批改：逗号

原文：e eleme

批改：cultural elements

原文：ao s

批改：Lao She

原文：Sua

批改：Swan

原文：ven

批改：Evidently,

原文：rsity

批改：diverse

原文：ciety

批改：后加句号

原文： cartoon, there is a boiling hot pot. filled with many culture element, including lao she, Kung fu, Shakespeare, Suan lake and so on. Evently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that it is diversity culture that plays an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in soci

批改：第一段描述漫画比较全面，但是错在较多错误，有考生粗心原因，也有不知道具体语法和词汇使用的原因，加强学习。

原文：nom

批改：phenomenon

批改：逗号

原文：gnific

批改：significant

原文：ar

批改：learning

原文：gnor

批改：significance

原文：tiond

批改：national

原文：ersrt

批改：diverse

原文：rder

批改：hinders

原文：rgre

批改：progress

原文：natio

批改：international

原文：nomeron is thought-provoking in several ways. but two of them are particularly srgnificant. First and foremost,learn about diverse cultures holds exceptional signor ificance for a nation, as it serves as a crucial cornerstone for boosting overall nationd al strength, further propelling social stability and sustainable development. What is more, neglecting diversrty culture is like a heavy chain that hirders our nation"s prgress,not only hindering its ability to maintain healthy and rapid growth, but also significantly affecting its internation development.

批改：现象解释比较到位，句子结构比较合理，但是单词错的比较多，影响整体观感哦

原文：arin

批改：learning

原文：uerb

批改：diverse

原文：tch

批改：which

原文：nefit

批改：后加句号

原文：houl

批改：should

原文：we s

批改：前面加句号，We大写

原文：tiel

批改：actively

原文：ditron

批改：traditional

原文：re

批改：后加句号

原文： lay.

批改：删掉

原文：rillra

批改：brilliance

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：9/20

语法：语法上注意标点，大小写，句子要成句子哦，其实句子结构整体是可以的，是不是考生在纸上写好，然后识别上传错了呀？其实可以在电脑上写，这样老师可以给你改的比较客观哦，在纸上写识别的话，也要再次检查作文是否有错的。

逻辑：整体逻辑可以的。

词汇：单词错的太多了，注意修改。

内容：内容比较符合英文作文写作要求，结构合理。但是错误太多导致整体观感不是很好哦

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