对于考研英语一而言，2025年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2025年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2025年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should 1)describe and interpret the chart, and 2)give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2025年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly dispalys the percentage breakdown of the daily activities of elderly in a certain community.Watching TVtakes the lead at 90.8%,followed by walking at 68.3%.Additionally,factors such as elevating flowers,reading some books,and playing chess are also considered,accounting for 34.7%,31.8% and 18.4%,respectively.

The core reason for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.To start with,as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes,our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound relaxing system,enabling the elderly people to watch TV alone.In addition,in the wake of high-speed advancement of society,the elderly

people are no longer content with mere material satisfaction; they also pursue the spiritual enjoyment.This explains why an increasing number of the elderly people choose to watch TV rather than playing chess with others.Considering those factors,the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising

What about future trends?I am confident that the above statistically figures accurately and truthfully reffect the choice of the elderly,serveing as a microcosm of changes in the era,and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：elderly

批改：the 加形容词表示一类人，改为 the elderly

原文：elevating flowers

批改：养花 最合适的表达是 gardening

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图表内容

原文：reason

批改：下列有几个原因，改为复数 reasons

原文：the elderly people

批改：要么写为 the elderly ； 要么写为 elderly people

原文：alone

批改：建议删去

原文：the

批改：删去

原文：the

批改：删去

原文：rather than playing chess with others.

批改：此处建议都删去，此处只分析单独的元素即可，也就是为什么更多的老年人选择看电视，不用和下棋比较

原文：unsurprising

批改：内容表达不错，但是在分析原因时我们多选择占比最大的一至两个元素进行剖析。其中，看电视占比最高，必须进行原因分析。但另一个原因分析可以给到占比第二的散步；不用两个原因只用来分析一个因素

原文：relaxing

批改：此处表达不地道，可改为 leisure and recreation

原文：statistically

批改：形容词修饰名词，改为 statistical

原文：reffect

批改：reflect

原文：choice

批改：此处是多个选择，改为 choices

批改：结尾段表达不错

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11分/ 15分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明的个人观点与图表的内容是贴合的

语言表达：存在几处语法和拼写问题，词汇表达不错，一些句式表达也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体，但是在分析原因时我们多选择占比最大的一至两个元素进行剖析。写两个原因时，不需要两个原因都用来分析一个因素

修改建议：1. 语法和内容表达问题结合作文批注仔细修改 2. 拼写要细心，要多注意以上问题，进一步提高自己的语言表达，总的来说写的不错，继续加油！

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