作为考研英语备考的核心模块，2015年考研英语二大作文承载了大量学生的提分期待。本文带来的这篇批改例文，紧扣考研英语二大作文常见话题，由启航教育资深英语教研团队逐句批改，详细标注语法、词汇与逻辑三大失分点，是考研英语写作提分的优质资料。

一、2015年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2015年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2015年考研英语二大作文批改例文

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48. The bar chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of spending in the Spring Festival by residents of a city. Hansel takes the lead at 40%, followed by eating at 20%. Additionally, factors such as transportation and rest are also considered, accounting for 20% and 20%, respectively

In the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people"s attitudes towards celebrating the Spring Festival have undergone signi-ficant changes. People are no longer content with mere material satis-faction, they also persue spiritual enjoyment. Against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to liking hansel and have become the primary consumer group.

What about future trends? I am confident that the above satis-tical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of young generations, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades

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三、考研英语作文批改

原文：y

批改：内容上精准呈现图表核心数据，明确各类消费占比及主次关系，契合题意要求；语言逻辑连贯。

原文：Hansel

批改：可换为 sending New Year gifts

原文：rest

批改：其他因素，用rest不合适，可换为 other factors

原文：persue

批改：pursue

原文： liking hansel

批改：句意不通，可换为 sending New Year gifts

批改：内容上围绕数据背后原因展开，结合社会发展与群体需求分析，贴合主题要求；语言逻辑链条完整，表达具有一定说服力。

原文：s

批改：内容上基于前文分析给出合理趋势预测，呼应图表核心规律，符合写作要求；语言逻辑清晰，表述简洁凝练，精准概括未来发展走向。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：9

评语：结构完整，遵循三段式；内容主题贴合春节消费，未跑题，符合要求；基本呈现图表核心数据。语言表达行文流畅度较好，需要注意拼写错误。继续加油！

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