对于考研英语一而言，2019年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文话题图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2019年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2019年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2019年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the pecentage of Graduates"destination. In 2013. the percentage of preparing to work was 68.1%, but by 2018, this rate had gradually decreased to 60.7%. Meanwile, the proportion of entering a higher school experienced a increase of 8.3% during the same period. Simultaneously，the proportion of starting up business increased slowly in 2013 and 2018.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes，our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound education system, enabling university students to have more opportunities for further education. In addition，as the saying goes, "on life"s stage, pressure is always present. " Nowadays. more and more students do not want to entry the society, they think it"s very difficult for them and they are not ready to work. So they decide to study in the higher school. Considering thes factors, the depicted phonomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I"m confident that the proportion of entering a higher school will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion working will likely continue to decrease, and the proportion of starting up business will likely remain stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：pecentage

批改：percentage

原文：G

批改：无需大写

原文：Meanwile

批改：Meanwhile

原文：a

批改：an

批改：应用逗号

原文：entry

批改：此处应用动词enter

原文：phonomenon

批改：phenomenon

原文：thes

批改：these

批改：内容上论述了题干数据，符合要求，契合题意；语言逻辑关系明确，段落表达简洁精准；注意单词拼写正确性

批改：总分结构明确，分点论证结构清晰，具有一定衔接手段；语言表达通顺；内容上，总体论述方向合理，符合主题，较为全面。

批改：以设问开头衔接前文，结构完整，预测趋势与图表核心逻辑一致，观点明确。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10

评语：结构完整，严格遵循三段式；图表数据呈现准确，无遗漏核心趋势；基本完成题目要求。语言表达整体流畅自然，但存在部分语法与拼写错误，影响语言精准度；内容上，具有一定逻辑说服力。继续加油！

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