对于考研英语一而言，2024年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、考研英语一2024年大作文题目

考研英语一2024年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the picture and the chart below. In your essay, you should 1) describe the picture and the chart briefly, 2) interpret the implied meaning, and 3) give your comments. Write your answer in 160-200 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2024年大作文批改例文

In the left-hand cartoon, a boy is standing in a park and saying proudly, "The newly-built park near my home is really nice!" The right-hand bar chart shows that the number of parks in a certain city increased significantly by 264 from 2020 to 2022.

The core reason for this phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build many parks, enabling residents to exercise every day. In addition, with the rapid development of society, people are no longer content with mere material satisfaction; they also pursue physical health. This explains why an increasing number of them choose to exercise in the park rather than stay at home. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of parks will continue to increase steadily in the next few decades. In contrast, the number of people who don"t exercise will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：In the left-hand cartoon, a boy is standing in a park and saying proudly, "The newly-built park near my home is really nice!" The right-hand bar chart shows that the number of parks in a certain city increased significantly by 264 from 2020 to 2022.

批改：对漫画内容描述的很全面，语言连贯。

原文：reason

批改：复数

原文：The core reason for this phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build many parks, enabling residents to exercise every day. In addition, with the rapid development of society, people are no longer content with mere material satisfaction; they also pursue physical health. This explains why an increasing number of them choose to exercise in the park rather than stay at home. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：该段落能够将图画背后蕴含的真实意义加以阐述，语言衔接连贯。能够运用逻辑关系词来连接句子，值得表扬。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the number of parks will continue to increase steadily in the next few decades. In contrast, the number of people who don"t exercise will likely continue to decrease.

批改：能对未来趋势进行预测与分析，与作文主题相符。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：18/20

内容切题，全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，名词单复数要使用正确；句式方面，句子结构完整连贯；语法方面，语法基础很好。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

修改建议：可以看出作文完成的非常认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬，继续加油。

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