作为考研英语备考的核心模块，2017年考研英语一大作文承载了大量学生的提分期待。本文带来的这篇批改例文，紧扣考研英语一写作技巧常见话题，由启航教育资深英语教研团队逐句批改，详细标注语法、词汇与逻辑三大失分点，是考研英语写作提分的优质资料。

一、考研英语一2017年大作文题目

考研英语一2017年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should1) describe the pictures briefly, 2) interpret the meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2017年大作文批改例文

Emerging from the illustrative cartoons is a thought-provoking scene: in the left picture,one person who lies on a chair is saying"I have so many books"in front of the bookshelf. By contrast,in the right picture,another person only has few books on the desk that he is reading and saying"I will strive to finish twenty books this year".The caption below reads"have books and read books".

This pictures convey a profound message:owning books doesn"t equate to reading them.Nowadays,many people take pride in having a large number of books,considering them as symbols of the konwledge.However,they failed to use them in daily life.On the contrary,some people who are keen in reading the books gain a lot.

The phenomenon prompt us to reflect whether we need more books or we take real actions to read books.First of all,what I hold is that we need take the actions in the first place,beacuse we should master more knowledge and apply them rather than purchase more books.Moreover,if you only focus on the superficial works,your ability won"t take advance in any ways.In the end,I hope everyone will keep your feet on the ground and attain some academic achievements.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：ng

批改：标点注意哦，saying, " ." 后面要加逗号和双引号

原文：g"I

批改：标点注意

原文：ave

批改：having

原文：ea

批改：reading

原文：a chair is saying"I have so many books"in front of the bookshelf. By contrast,in the right picture,another person only has few books on the desk that he is reading and saying"I will strive to finish twenty books this year".The caption below reads"have books and read book

批改：描述漫画还是比较到位的，内容丰富，句子结构也比较符合英文写作要求，但是有一些小错误，注意修改哦

原文：y failed

批改：fail

原文：pt

批改：加s

原文：the

批改：删掉

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13/20

语法：语法上注意标点，直接引语的特点和用法需要注意哦，更加完善一点，注意一般是动名词做主语或者短语，直接用动词的比较少，三单注意，时态也需要注意哦。

逻辑：整体逻辑可以的，读起来比较通顺。

词汇：单词整体比较好，没有错的，继续保持哦。

内容：结构还是不错的，内容比较贴合漫画主题，分析比较到位，比较有深度，结构看上去比较舒服。

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