对于考研英语一而言，2016年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文话题图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、考研英语二2016年大作文题目

考研英语二2016年大作文Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、考研英语二2016年大作文批改例文

The pie chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of different purposes of traveling for students at a certain university. Admiring scenery takes the lead at 37%, followed by relieving stress at 33%. Additionally, factors such as making friends, developing independence and other factors are also considered, accounting for 9%, 6% and 15%, repectively.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people are no longer content with mere material satisfaction; they also pursue spiritual enjoyment. This explains why an increasing number of people choose to get close to nuture . In addition, as the saying goes,"On life "s stage, pressure is always present." Nowadays, university students are compelled to confront immense academic pressure, and as a result, travelling has emerged as their significant choice for utilizing leisure time. Considering these factors,the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsuprising.

What about future trend? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choice of college students, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：repectively

批改：respectively

原文： for

批改：among，在学生中间

原文：The pie chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of different purposes of traveling for students at a certain university. Admiring scenery takes the lead at 37%, followed by relieving stress at 33%. Additionally, factors such as making friends, developing independence and other factors are also considered, accounting for 9%, 6% and 15%, repectively

批改：开头信息清晰明了

原文：nuture

批改：nature

原文：people

批改：换成students更符合主题

原文：people

批改：换成students更符合主题

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people are no longer content with mere material satisfaction; they also pursue spiritual enjoyment. This explains why an increasing number of people choose to get close to nuture . In addition, as the saying goes,"On life "s stage, pressure is always present." Nowadays, university students are compelled to confront immense academic pressure, and as a result, travelling has emerged as their significant choice for utilizing leisure time. Considering these factors,the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsuprisin

批改：词汇和句型丰富

原文： trend

批改：改为复数

原文：What about future trend? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choice of college students, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades

批改：good

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/15

1.作文内容包含全面，主题明确，层次分明；

2.运用复杂的语法结构和高级词汇，定语从句，宾语从句、非谓语动词和状语从句很棒；

3.采用恰当的衔接手法，内容较为连贯；

4.有自己的原创，有老师讲的高分词汇和模板句型，要灵活结合二者，成为自己的写作资源，加油！

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