对于考研英语一而言，2024年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文话题图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、考研英语一2024年大作文题目

考研英语一2024年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the picture and the chart below. In your essay, you should 1) describe the picture and the chart briefly, 2) interpret the implied meaning, and 3) give your comments. Write your answer in 160-200 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2024年大作文批改例文

In the left-hand cartoon , there is a boy waking in a park and saying the park in front of his home is really great, with some people running in the park.On the contrary,the right-hand bar chart clearly depicts the number of parks at a certain city during the last three years.In2020,the number of parks was 406,but by 2022,this figure had substantially risen to 670.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows . To start with ,as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes , our government has made tremendous efforts to build more and more parts , enabling people to have ample opportunities for daily exercise and relaxing events. In addition ,as we all know , the outbreak of COVID -19 has impacted every aspect of our lives , significantly altering people " s behaviors and choices . Consequently , an increasing number of individuals have started paying more attention to health and starting exercise. Considering these factors , the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising .

What about future trends ? I am confident that the number of parks is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades .

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：waking

批改：walking

原文：In the left-hand cartoon , there is a boy waking in a park and saying the park in front of his home is really great, with some people running in the park.On the contrary,the right-hand bar chart clearly depicts the number of parks at a certain city during the last three years.In2020,the number of parks was 406,but by 2022,this figure had substantially risen to 670.

批改：对漫画内容描述的很全面，语言连贯。

原文：parts

批改：parks

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows . To start with ,as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes , our government has made tremendous efforts to build more and more parts , enabling people to have ample opportunities for daily exercise and relaxing events. In addition ,as we all know , the outbreak of COVID -19 has impacted every aspect of our lives , significantly altering people " s behaviors and choices . Consequently , an increasing number of individuals have started paying more attention to health and starting exercise. Considering these factors , the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising

批改：该段落能够将图画背后蕴含的真实意义加以阐述，语言衔接连贯。能够运用逻辑关系词来连接句子，值得表扬。

原文：What about future trends ? I am confident that the number of parks is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades .

批改：能对未来趋势进行预测与分析，与作文主题相符。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：18/20

内容切题，全面的描绘出了图画中的内容。词汇方面，注意避免拼写错误；句式方面，句子结构完整连贯；语法方面，语法基础很好。逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，结构清晰。

修改建议：可以看出作文完成的非常认真，无论是内容的充分性还是语言的逻辑结构都特别的清晰，值得表扬。如果能够再注意避免以上的一些小的细节问题会更好。继续加油。

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